Loath-some's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[2 - The Story of Khale]

Amazing

This is amazing. Great characters and a great idea. The characters are so alive in this, because of the time you put down on the fps. But there are times when you used tweens twisted with this, that's the biggest complaint I have. You shouldn't mix these together. And some of the voice acting could have been better.

Just some small tweaks to think of for the future.

It's overall very amazing, keep this up. I hope to see an even more amazing episode following.

[1 - The Story of Khale]

INCREDIBLE

Sorry for the reply but damn;

This is amazing, lovely feeling into this and the character's personality shines as he flies through the woods. You can really sense the feeling of freedom in this. There are some colors/shading/lightning that could have been better but since I reviewed this so late I suppose you've bettered. I'll check the newer ones too. This was truly amazing!

[Jim Day 08]

A lot to better

You had a decent script going there but it kinda died when it ended that fast. Not only was it short, it had terrible voice acting. The lines felt so forced and the jokes were very predictable, mostly the falling down stairs one. These are jokes most 13 year olds would laugh to, I think the majority of your viewers found the jokes rather immature. Also, the animation and the character needs to better. It was just all simple shapes for a character, a simple chibi character.

But I got to give you credit for the effort. Keep trying, you'll get there. You seem rather positive about animating so I'm not really doubting you. This one just didn't hit through well, you know?

Jimtopia responds:

What can I say? I have a 13 year olds sense of humor. And yes, I am very positive about animating, I love it.

[Samson the Foolish]

So-so

It was a bit too fast forward, the story was hard to follow. My expression were "Woah, what's going on here!?". You need to work on your story telling. Also to use more fbf than tweens. It looked weird with the tweens you threw in here and there.

Yet, I can see the effort you put into this project though! The characters are great, the story was fine actually but just too fast and too forward. If you worked on this a bit more I'm sure it'd be kickass.

[FF6 Opera-Pella Fun]

Cool idea

You have a cool idea going there and I like your drawing style. Although the animation needs more inbetweens, it was kind of jumpy. And I'd enjoy it more if there were other happenings than singing and a car crash.

I'd say it's a decent flash but it really feels like you could do better.

[Blockhead: Quick Shot 2]

Quite fine actually

Very smooth animation, I really liked it. Although a lot of the lipsync didn't fit a lot of the characters. Something to better in the future.

And well, I didn't really enjoy the jokes either. But I'll judge this flash on it's animation rather than the jokes so, have a seven.

[TouchDwnTurnAround Collab]

Well

It's a fine collab even though most of the parts didn't have the pixel tool. And some of you used the pixeltool as a normal drawing brush and that made it look like it was some choppy stuff drawn in mspaint.

Honestly I like rtils part the most because he seem to be one of a very few people that knows how to use the pixel tool properly.

Also, tweening pixels looks really really weird in flashes in my opinion, please don't do that.

But, most of the parts were okay, some were quite good actually and I really like the menu. But the collab in overall is kinda so-so.

[Ashborne - Change]

Interesting concept

Very good animated, and I like the concept. But the texture kinda made me feel weird when I watched this. It's hard to get textures right, so yeah. It kinda got hard to watch the flash. I think it'd look better without them. But that's just my personal opinion about it.

Overall, this was great, keep it up.

[Bytesize]

honestly...

Why did you submit this, Tom? You disappoint me. You already have it on the frontpage, why promote it further? This makes no sense to me. I didn't look through them all cause I'm sure they are all on the frontpage already. It's like a collab you aren't a part of yourself (not enough).

So, you get prizes, from your own website where you're the admin and have a lot of attention already as the admin. But you submit something that was made by others just for the website?

You know better than that.