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[Legend of Miyamoto]

So so

I like the concept and the idea of this. But I could have enjoyed it bunches more if you did the art yourself. The sprite thing looked so lazy. You seem to have the skills to pull off a good animation with drawn characters, please do.

[Jerry and The Closet]

Haha sweet

The best way of reviewing this flash would be "HAHAHAHA" but that's kind of dull so:

This was hilarious man. This is just the type of humor that I love. By making fun of something cute, making him look retarded, that's gold. The animation was funny too, good timing with it.

One thing that could have been better was the joke at the end of the flash. The "divorce" joke. After laughing so much through the whole flash, that joke didn't really keep the standard. I was like "GAHAHAHAAH *divorce line* AHhah..ahh..".

Another thing, I think you should make your characters more interesting by the design. I know it's your style to make the heads round and the eyes the same way and stuff but it gets kind of repetitive to look at. Try vary it more, go crazy with your style!

But in overall, this was amazing and funny. Keep the critique in mind and pull something even more awesome off next time.

[Gangsta Bean 2 Teaser]

Interesting

Looks very interesting but there's a few things I'd like and not like to see in it.
I'd like to see some of the levels, this looked like a small prologue. And also, I'd avoid using red and blue like that, they kind of kick eachother out. It's like magnets facing eachother the wrong way.

[Madness: Bar Brawl]

sweet

You did well with the animation and stuff but the music really hurt my ears man. It has some small squeek sounds in it that's reaaallly pitchy. Blows my brain out of my head.

But yeah, that was nice. I see that you've improved a lot too, Anigen.

[Happy Birthday NitroFlash]

beldrama

Hey a person I defiantly do not know.
Have a 10, because I'm just that kind.

Or maybe just because this flash is amazing.
Or maybe just because you're Beldrama.
Or maybe just because I say so.

[MOAPAC - Episode 1]

ugh

I can see the effort you put into this, but it doesn't cut it for me. Really... Because when you make an animation you have to put up some kind of storyline and a plotline. You had none of those. You probably made up things as you animated? I did that when I started, it's not a good thing to do. You will end up having no structure to it. Also try to stay away from such random humor, I'm fine with silly things and stuff but this was just too much.

"Hi I'm a cow I don't eat keys"
"okay well, let's do the wave guys"
"okay"
"Fuck there's aliens in my shoe"
"lol okay"

That's somewhat the sort of humor in this. It's really not funny, the ones thinking it is are either very young or very childish. Don't make your series fail like this, it'd be nice to see something new around here.

RhysMus responds:

i find this animation funny and i made it, i am 18 yet i am a childish person, i make animation for myself not anyone else because it makes me happy, no matter if anyone likes it, i always will :D

["A Slice of the Action"]

could be a lot better

First of all I must get straight that I don't dislike your animation or style of drawing. But you're throwing it away so much on the writing. This is the exact same ending on the "tux" animation. I'd like your stuff a lot more without the random dying.

It's like watching a great movie and then: BOOM A BOMB EXPLODED, EVERYONE DIED. kind of ending. And it's like the only punchline in your movie as well. You need to improve your writing, a lot. Because it's really ruining your stuff.

[yoghurt pants]

hahaha

Haha, the fact that this was so strange made it incredibly funny. It could have been a tiny bit longer and a bit more stuff into it than that though but, it was hilarious nevertheless.

[There She Is!! step4]

Mixed feelings about this one

I'll start off with the things I liked in this. I did like the story and the way you put it up and all. The emotion really showed through the characters and such.

But, there was less animation in this one than the others. This one was more of a slideshow with standstill drawings and sometimes some slight movement. If you compare this to the older ones anyone would easily see that there is more animation in the older. What happened?

I hope that the next final episode will be a lot better. Not by any means was this bad or anything but it didn't really hold the standards from the past episodes.

[Awesome Center Redux]

okaay

I get the joke, it's kinda funny and the animation was of course better in this one, but to see the same jokes twice isn't as funny as the first time. I'd enjoy this bunches more if it was original (that was kind of ironic really).

I'm not a big fan of your stuff, but I respect your work and some stuff are quite funny but those reduxes are just pointless to me. Make something new, would you?

Egoraptor responds:

Nnnyes I'm working on this right now I'm just releasing the remakes I did for the DVD 'eh? That's what it says in the description you see and there's one remake left yes there is it's all in the description it is I swear.