Loath-some's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spookyville 2]

Somewhat entertaining

I love your timing with the jokes and those characters and I really love your style of drawing. This could be a great series, but it needs some work. I'd like to see this with some more advanced writing and not random humor like that. It got me thinking "what am I watching?". It's need some structure.

I also think you(/the voice actors) needs some time on doing the voices right. The girls voice was great, because it sounded natural. The others sounded tad forced, did you make them yourself? Try finding your range in your voice and try to make the voice as clear as possible without distorting it too much. It sounds sort of "blurry".

This isn't by any means a bad animation though. It was really entertaining, just a bit too random.

[Birth of B]

h em em eme em

Lol that's amazing, Carbonwater. Saw this on DA, made me laugh as much this time too.

You slut!

Carbonwater responds:

8D.

[Harry The Harlequin Fetus]

holy fucking shit

I must say, I haven't been this freaked out by a flash in a very long while. And for some weird reason I really liked this. It's artistic in a ... very obscure way.

[Strawberry 2095]

Pretty cool

Great choice of song, the animation really suited the song. I really loved how you used the clock as a real eye, I haven't seen that before.. at all. I really liked the bite animation with the clock too, that was the best part of the flash in my opinion.

Yet it lacked a lot of backgrounds and it got a little bit repetitive when you used the same graphics over and over. But this still makes one of the better clock day flashes I've seen so far!

[Easy Way Out]

Cool

Lovely work on the backgrounds, the black and the orange really worked together and I haven't seen a such concept in a looong while! It was really artistic, you really pulled that off well! I also like the work of the devil thing there too, nice twist.

Yet I do think you could have bettered the drawings in this and the graphics. It worked most of the time though. But then again, putting more time into the drawings themselves would take longer time and then this piece might wouldn't have been as long as it was. So I'm not quite sure if that's a good or a bad thing. But it could have been a little better so I'm giving you a nine.

But I remain entertained.

Munglai responds:

I only had two weeks to make this and I gave myself a week of storyboarding and a week of animating. If I could have had a third week to clean it up that would have been lovely but I didn't so oh well.

[Your All Fags]

lol

your all fags

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[Surface Texture]

Great masking

The work with textures and masks (?) were sweet. The whole idea was really artistic, yet I'd like to see more of it so it was kinda sad that it ended so quickly. Like I said, great masking but the animation looked a bit lazy. Instead of making the thing run or walk you made his leg grow and "hook shoot" itself from A to B. And that's where the 3 points fell of from my part.

MorrowDays responds:

okay, I'll explain that:

yes, masks were used, a whole bunch of them actually. even though it was a simple character, because the arms, legs, head, and torso all had different patterns on them, they each had to be done separately, frame by frame. plus the eyes but those were easy.

so if I animated him take two steps, which would probably take maybe 14 frames, I'd have to animate 14 leg frames, 14 arm frames, 14 torso, and 14 head, all in separate layers, which is like, 56 drawn frames for two steps of animation.

the movement in the black background part hopefully looked less lazy because that was all in one layer so it didn't take huge amounts of time :P

glad you liked it.

moro

[TSAH3: The Covenant]

Heh, kinda funny

I really like the artwork in this and the jokes were kinda funny too. Yet, there were a few jokes I didn't get. And I suppose that's the bad thing about game parodies, especially when joking about it and the viewer hasn't played the game, they simply won't get it. And I'm one of them. Until next time, try make the jokes so that everyone gets them? Thanks!

Snow-Fox responds:

Every VG parody usually implies that the person should play the game to get the jokes....If I'm gunna have to establish characters and background, I may as well make a original funny cartoon

[Dining with the Devil]

Very brave

I must say it was very brave of you to submit a such mature told story. With that I mean; more mature audiences would probably get this kind of story. Younger people might would have given the comment "I don't get it!" Yet, the story could have been dragged a little more. It was just on the edge of being too short.

The texture was really adding effect into this animation, I really liked it. Some of the drawings could have been a little better but that's alright.

Keep this up, I would really want to see something like this from you once more.