Loath-some's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tall 'n Short]

as original as metalgear

Wasn't too surprising that it came from you.

But I'm giving you a 10 because of the amazing graphics and the awesome animation there. Man I've never seen anything like it in my life before.

[Look up at the sky]

Could been a lot better

The timing and syncing is great and you really brought the emotion to the viewer but it got quite boring with the same angel throughout the whole cartoon. It'd be a lot more interesting to watch if you added something more into it.

This wasn't terrible though, it just needed more. More camera angels. Maybe even a storyline/plot.

[The iPhone Shuffle]

Terrible

Basically Tomamoto did all the humor. The animation was extremely choppy, no lipsync, no movement except some tweens. The character was basically a stickfigure.

Just no.

[TT: 009 Mr. Johnson]

Why?

The animation was incredibly sloppy. The humor was okay, but it sure was not funny twice. Why did you guys have to do the joke two times? I was expecting some kind of different turn in the middle of both of these.

But what I really don't get is why you both rushed the animation so much. It's really very mainstream in animation on the internet nowdays, to just rush some of the animating and do extremely random humor to please the audience. Mix some good animation with some well thought through humor.

Just please try a little harder next time.

[Rwd: 023 Silent Night]

Took 3 animators to create this?

Really, one person could have made this on his/her own in a few days. It was very short, hardly any good animation in it. The song was creative and quite funny though. But all in all it was just like some intro/opening to some series.

RadicalWrongDoers responds:

It's 2 guys. Radicalwrongdoers is the crew.
And we made it in one day.

[These Pancakes Are Tiny]

Great animation, less great story telling

The animation was fine and so was all the backgrounds. The humor was kinda so-so (the gaming joke was fun though, I bet many can relate), not really my thing but I won't really judge on that.

But you have to work on your storytelling. It'd be nice with a little more story than just gaming and a "fight" on a bar. It needed a twist at the end too. By story I don't mean stuff like fighting dragons and saving princesses. But I bet you get my point.

It also needs to be slightly longer, like a scene or two. Because even with a twist at the end now would still feel a bit empty and short.

But there are no doubts, I think you can make something even better next time. This wasn't terrible by any means though. Keep up the animating and better the writing!

Good luck!

[Emo Boy Ep.1]

Hahahaha

Lmao, I was randomly browsing NG and found this in the underground of the week.
Pretty funny since I don't know who you are, but thanks for the laugh and the exposure.

cHunter responds:

lol, thanks for the 10. ;D

[Tywo At Large Ep. #3]

Hilarious

This is great. Good job with the jokes and especially the backgrounds. Those blew me away completely. And like "Hedgepig" said, I watched Breakfast Club a few months ago myself so this was pretty funny seeing that in there, heh.

One thing though, some of the movements like walks and such looked a bit lifeless or stiff. That's the only thing I could say as for critique. And well yeah, try not to do those flashback kind of jokes, you'd easily be accused for stealing familyguy jokes, that's how it works nowdays.

All in all, great job on this. One of the better series I've seen on NG.

Pixmintro responds:

Thnaks, yeah, I'm still experimenting with some tweening so I'll try a little more FBF for the next movie. Also, those cutaway jokes are an isolated incident, just though of something funny and went for it... As long as it isn't a useless pop culture reference.

Little known fact: The Simpsons were the first to introduce cutaways, they stopped soon after Family Guy came on the air. :)

[forage]

Very good animation but-

The animation is superb but it could have been a little longer. You should have worked on the idea a bit more than that. I could expect what was going to happen.

[The Art Show]

Slow and boring

Not trying to be an asshole, man. But this was very boring and slow. The animation was great and the style looks cool but it's very boring. You need to make things happen with better timing and maybe add some different angles on the screen and not use one single background through the whole movie.