Loath-some's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[How the Swine Flu Started]

lmao

Haha yeah, I had the same theory.
Anyhow. I liked the flash, the animation and the graphics where fine. But like I said I found it a bit predictable and I suppose a lot of other people thought as I did. Or maybe I just got lucky/unlucky? I don't know. And, I suppose you could have squeezed in a little more fbf too.

However, it was a really nice flash and I enjoyed it. Got a nice laugh out of it even though I knew what was coming...

...in the ass of a pig.

[The Paper Prince]

Lovely story

The story is amazing and so is the animation. I can really see the effort shine through this. Keep on animating, you've got the talent.

Although, you could better on the line consistency. Instead of making really thin lines, make fluid ones. That looks smooth. So instead of drawing short and thin lines. Make them flow with the form and let the size of the brush follow that motion.

Hope that's something to think about for the next piece you produce! Keep the good work up.

[Hyperboy: Episode 5]

Pretty cool

The characters are really simple but the way you animate and use cameraviews still makes it interesting. Some of the writing could have been better though, work on the jokes to make it as unpredictable as possible. But I kinda like it a lot already so, keep up the good work.

[-Sandwich-]

Hm, pretty nice

Sort of catchy song there, made me smile a bit to be honest!
The animation is better than usual I noticed. I really liked that, good job.
Most backgrounds were fine aswell but there was one I didn't like, the sunset. It felt too "gradient" like. But although, such backgrounds are hard to pull off. So I suppose that's something for you to practice on: Backgrounds.

I actually liked this more than your usual flashes with the crew.

eddsworld responds:

Took a lot longer, i liked the background more in this than my usual - but i hope its worthy for the song :D

[bluh bluh bluh.]

Nice job Wappin

Didn't know you could do stop motion as well man!
Good job.

RWappin responds:

eeYAY!

[Two minutes of terror EP2]

Very nice idea

Very nice idea there, I like the deaf thing and all that. But there's one thing... The way you ended it was way to hasty. You should have made it longer and made some sense out of the ending. I was expecting some running in some forests as the guy gets hunted by that guy, or something.

Cause that was all: HE IS BLIND *ring ring SPLAT* THE END

Catching my drift?

[Drunken Stick]

Fairly good animation

The animation was fairly good, for being stick figures. I don't think stick figures can be animated better. That's the thing though, you're limited.

Also, the whole "drunken style" is ripped off from Naruto. Which I don't watch but I know it's from there.

[For Loathsome]

Lmao

I love you man.

[:: Achievements ::]

I'm getting annoyed of your rants

I'm getting annoyed of your rants
Achievement!

Seriously, when is it going to stop? It's the same thing over and over. Time to try something new? Or like, rant in a more creative way? Having like.. I don't know, a message through a story instead of bashing out the words?

[Sketched - Therapy]

Nice story

I like the story and the way you made the voice acting. I'm not much for this kind of jokes though but I'm not judging on that. What I am however judging at is the story telling and the animation aswell as the quality of your drawing.

The drawings are decent, it works. But the animation was kind of sloppy, mostly because there's barley any face expression while they are speaking. They don't feel much alive.

But in overall, it's a fine thought out animation.

sirjeffofshort responds:

Thanks for your review. It was actually better thought out and more helpful than most. Doing a monthly series does take a bit of a toll and therefore certain things tend so slip, specifically facial animations. Hopefully as I get better I will be able to animate faster and the characters faces will become more expressive. Thanks for the suggestions.