Loath-some's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[LittleWing]

Confusing but nice animation

I really liked the animation in this, it was very smooth and fluid.
You could however improve by studying lifedrawing more for improving your drawing. But the main thing to improve on would be the story telling.

[In My Arms Collab]

Awesome collab

This collab sure turned out nicely. I saw jeinus part on DA, which also is my favorite part aswell.

However, nice job you guys!

[Narwhals]

Well

The song is good.

Yeah.

[Marco the Magnificent]

Put your effort into something better

It wasn't terrible, but neither was it good.

You need to work on the writing a lot, it need to have a purpose, if not a purpose you must aim on getting the viewer in a mood, it need to have an effect on the viewer.

I read the description and you wanted us to find the character cute. It kinda felt like a kid with adhd (not trying to bash people with ahd though) more than cute.

Put your effort into something better, you have the skill to make something great but you need to use it in the right way.

[Endeavour]

Really sweet

I really liked the story. You know how to tell a story well, aswell as giving the viewer the right feeling throughout the movie.

One thing that bothered me was that the character was completely transparent, it looked kind of bland. But apart from that, it was real nice!

[Girlchan in Paradise Ep1]

Step in the right direction

It's nice to see something a bit more original from you. I love satire, and that was so true!

I still want to see what you can pull off. I've seen your art on various websites and I know you could make something serious and amazing. Because you seem to have a bad habit to overdo things (such as the humor).

Although, this wasn't terrible at all, the intro was nicely animated most of the time. The song was hilarious too.

Anyways, this is one step in the right direction, keep heading that way.

[LEFT4LOL]

decent

Some of the humor was nice, like the start, the healing part and the friendly-fire. I could relate to that and had a little laugh.

But that art in overall was just not as good, you lost a lot of points from me there. The characters were kinda stiff looking, the girl looked all empty in the eyes, like a doll.

[-Love at First Sight-]

Great job

Great job guys, turned out to be a great collab in the end.
I'm sorry that I had to drop out of it, but you know, sometimes life can be a bitch and hold you back. That's exactly what happened to me. Sorry for that. But yeah, I tried.

Glad it got finished though!

[Sing you Sinners]

wow

How this didn't get an award is beyond me.
Nice fbf, some timing could have been a bit better but other than that it's perfect.

[Fågelskrämman]

Poetisk!

(NOTE: This review is written in Swedish because the author is Swedish aswell, please don't judge the review by the language.)

Väldigt poetisk. Du lyckades verkligen få en att tycka synd om fågelskrämman. Gillade musikvalet och det där med avföringen och hur dom sköt på honom.

Men jag tycker du kunde ha gjort lite mer händelser. För när månaderna/åren började flyga förbi där så kändes det lite skyndat. Hade behövts några scener till så att man riktigt kommer in i känslan innan tåren. För själv är jag verkligen en sucker för såna här filmer som man säger.

Grafiken i filmen var dock topnotch, gillade det verkligen. Var inte allt för mycket animation i den, men det fungerar som den är, du fick ändå fram berättelsen och känslan.

Så till nästa gång så jobba lite på skrivandet. Allt annat är awesome.
Hoppas att se mer från dig!